Website

I already built my website in second year an d so when I get some money next term I intend to buy a domain name and a hosting space.
I've already looked at domain names and found that www.tomlloydphoto.co.uk is free, so I will purchase it next term.



From this screen shot I think it's clear that it needs updating to look a little more modern and with the times. Also I want to make the site bigger and include more sections for each series of work that I have done.

Portfolio review

As part of Unit 303 I have had my portfolio reviewed by professional photographer Dinu Li. He and I had a one on one tutorial in which we looked through my ongoing digital portfolio and then discussed the work I was doing at the time (Vermeer brief).

We first looked at some of the work I had in my portfolio, which was a short series from my second year.

He commented on how the images need to flow more as a series, that firstly they needed to be all the same size within the portfolio so as to have consistency, and secondly that they should have a common theme running through them, so as not to look like a random set of photographs. I agree that they should all be the same size, and initially I thought that they did have a common theme running through them, with the woman in the gown, however on further reflection I now agree with Dinu, as they don’t seem to go anywhere as a series, and there isn’t really a narrative within them. I have since chosen to take them out of my portfolio.

From there we moved on to looking at the Vermeer brief which I was working on at the time, and discussed two of my images from it.

Looking at them he stated that they had some potential and that my idea of showing part of a greater narrative was interesting, however I needed to expand on this idea, and improve my technical skills such as my lighting. I think that this is a fair point on the images, and I agree that the lighting isn’t quite correct, but I am slightly unsure as to what he meant by expanding on my ideas.

What was interesting is that he seemed more fascinated with some other images for the Vermeer brief that I had chosen not to use.

He told me that he particularly liked the composition within these images, and that the use of negative space worked very well. He thought that I could really go somewhere with them if I simply thought a little more about what was going on in the frame. He picked up on that I was trying to show a bizarre situation, something that was part of a bigger narrative, and he offered suggestions such as having boxes piled as high as the roof, and having the person looking around bewildered.

Even though I was still planning not to go on with those images, it was really useful to get some constructive and positive criticism back from Dinu. Just to know that my ideas were interesting and that I had used composition and negative space to good effect was very reassuring.

Conclusion/Evaluation

After a long haul, and a lot of deliberation and changes I have finally reached the conclusion of my project. I have really struggled with this brief, and initially I found it very difficult to find a theme that I could base my work on. I had a lot of loose ideas to begin with, and when i finally got to shooting it really helped and I was able to progress with my ideas and develop.

When it came to shooting, I liked doing the earlier images I did of the silhouettes and the trees, as it was quite challenging to set everything up, find the right location and get what I wanted. Even when my ideas changed to what they are now, the spotlighting images, I actually really enjoyed doing them. It was quite challenging to figure out ways in which to get the lighting, composition and exposures right, and it was very rewarding when I finally got the outcomes I wanted.

There are certain aspects to the work I would change if I could go back, and I would certainly get shooting a lot earlier in the brief. Instead of deliberating over loose idea for a few week, I should have just jumped straight in.
I think that this could be a good starting point for a much bigger project, and I could perhaps move it on to look at people's reactions in more varied situations, not just a dark room.

Final image choices

So finally, after a lot of shooting and a lot of changing of ideas I have edited down to my fianl selection of six images. It was a quite a difficult process to decide which ones I wanted to include, and I spent a good few hours looking through them all to see which ones worked best. As I sated previously I thought it was going to be difficult to make them flow cohesivley as a series, due to the fact the positioning of the model was different in every frame. However I managed to overcome this, because as the background was black I could cut around the head and shoulders and move it to anywhere in the frame I wanted, then simply fill in the void that I had moved them from. I did this so the series had a constant flowing throughout, and I chose to have three of the people on the left hand side looking to the right, and the other three vise-versa. I think this works quite well, and when I saw the print outs of them all together, it really helped to just focus on the persons face and their reaction.








I like that the light changes slightly throughout the series, as it gives each person and their emotional reaction a distinctive look and feel. Also when editing these six images in their RAW formats, I chose to lower the temperature of them slightly, making them appear more blue and more cold. I did this as way to make the audience feel unnerved by the images.





I think that even though most of the people's reactions to the darkness are the same, there a subtle differences in them that really help them stand out. Some of them appear more scared, while others are more curious to what is happening, and some even appear confident of the situation.





All in all I am pleased with the outcome of the series as a whole, and I think that they flow really nicely and really capture the reactions of the people to the darkness.

Shoot nine

For my ninth shoot I managed to get hold of three models for the time that I had the fashion studio, whic was quite lucky. I arranged for them to all come at ten minute intervals, which left me enough time to get the images I wanted



This was the first model I used didn't seem to be too uncomfortable with the situation he was in. However I quite liked this, and the way he seemed confident with his surroundings. It should work well in the series, as it shows variation on the reactions.




The second model I used, helped me produce possibly my faourite image so far. Just look at the image below, and his reaction to hs situation; he looks really uncomfortable and worried.






I managed to get quite a lot of shots of my third model which was useful, because it will give me more options when I come to edit down my final selection.


Although with the photograph below, his coat is in the shot I will be able to darken it up to compensate. It was an error by me and I should have intstructed him to wear a dark top, but that could be interfering too much with the situation.

Shoot eight

I did my eighth shoot today, and got hold of two models for this one, and it went to plan I feel.
It was difficult while shooting because a lot of the time the model moves, and as my shutter speed needed to be on 1 second, only a small selection of the images are sharp enough and useable. However the ones that are work well, and can be used.



I quite like the positioning of his below, as he seems bewildered by something up high and to the side. It is interesting, but I think I still prefer the image below that one.





These images are of another model, one that I again origianlly used and liked the look of.




I think that there is a genuine fear and apprehension on his face which I really like. It is realistic in saying that he is uncomfortable with his dark surroundings.



I have thought that when I am putting my final images into a series, I need to make them flow nicely. A problem is that the people I have photographed so far are positioned in all different places within the frames, and there is not much consistency. I will have to give this some more thought when I have shot everything and see them all together.